Hello this blog I have sent out during lockdown just to say Hi.
Here is some poems I made in lockdown
and these are only some of them.
Orange lockdown poem
Orange looks like an orange
Orange tastes like an orange
Orange smells like an orange
Orange feels like an orange
Orange sounds like an orange spraying into my brothers eye
I wish I had an orange
Haiku about oranges
Sweet yummy orange
Tasty tasty orange Mmm
Oranges beat pears
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy Name is Maddison im a year 8 at Yaldhurst Model School.
I really enjoy the idea of this and I think that it is very interesting but think that there are some things that you need to consider improving on. First I think that you could have written a bit about what your blog is about. SO the readers can understand a bit more.
Why did you decide to write about oranges?
Stay safe and stay home :D.
-Maddie
Kia ora Marlin, Your poems are interesting and we can tell you like eating oranges. The Maori word for orange is karaka and there is a karaka tree which has orange berries. We all need an orange a day for Vitamin C!
ReplyDeleteHello Marlin,
ReplyDeleteI'm Nikita from Yaldhurst Model School,
I stumbled upon your blog-post about oranges and poetry, I found myself quite curious but, when I started to read through this blog-post I laughed so much I almost fell off my chair! After reading half of this poem I couldn't breath whilst telling my nearby friends about your blog-post.
I found this extremely entertaining and humorous, and I'm hoping your brother is okay? Another question do you hate pears or just really love oranges?
I hope your happy out of quarantine with your oranges, if you ever got an orange that is.. But keep up the hilarious poems and catchy details!
Kind Regards,
Nikita
Hi Marlin,
ReplyDeleteHI my name is Sione and I attend St Pius x catholic school.I really like your poem.Keep up the good work.
Best wishes.